Sunday, April 1, 2007

MORE POETRY!

Reaction to Tsering Wangmo Dhompa
Prompt: Write a poem and construct it based on breath. Break the lines intuitively according to when you take a breath in the line
-i don't like this one. i didn't like writing either... so it goes.

yet again.
I’m not good at this at all
I never know what
I should say. It
Should be simple
Don’t you think?

But its not
The same thing
Happens every time
I blank out and
Say nothing of importance.

And I miss my
Chance yet again to
Be important, to
Make a statement.

I hate it every time
Utter dissapointment
In a missed
Opportunity.
26 march 2007

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